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0007629Part 81: UAFX Connecting Devices and Information Model [sg.BaseFacet]Specpublic2022-05-30 23:04
ReporterGeorg Biehler Assigned ToGeorg Biehler  
PrioritynormalSeverityminorReproducibilityN/A
Status closedResolutionfixed 
Product Version1.00.00 Release 
Target Version1.00.00 RC3Fixed in Version1.00.00 RC3 
Summary0007629: Editorial comments
Description

A bunch of editorial comments against Part81:
[editorial] UAFX versus UA FX, See next line: Why is there a different spelling?
[editorial] different dash symbol used Figure 7
[editorial] There are strange small characters around this link
[editorial] Add full stop
1 [editorial] This page has no header
2 [editorial] Points to part 4
2 [editorial] Points to part 9
2 [editorial] Points to part 17
2 [editorial] Points to part 110
2 [editorial] Points to part 23
3.3.1 [editorial] Italicize
3.3.3 [editorial] Superfluous space
4.2 [editorial] Term OfflineEngineering is defined in part 80. Is it intentionally not the defined term
4.3.1 [editorial] Italicize
4.3.3 [editorial] Font is more dense (probably 0.4 pt wider missing) and there is no full justification
4.3.3 [editorial] is this abbreviation defined in another document? Part 82 has the abbreviation, but is not referenced from this document
6.2.2 [editorial] probably prefixed with "0:" since its defined in part 23
6.2.2 [editorial] Organizes is a hierarchical reference, therefor has a different arrow symbol. Also the arrow from FxRoot to the AutomationComponent1 should be different.
6.3.2 [editorial] Different font size or letter "o" instead of digit "0"
6.4.2 [editorial] Superfluous space
6.4.6.3 [editorial] Previous method signatures are formatted differently (bold, …)
6.5.3 [editorial] Should not be bold
6.7.4.2 [editorial] Table shifted
8.1 [editorial] Suceeded -> Succeeded
8.2 [editorial] Prepend "0:", also in following tables
10.3 [editorial] Additonal -> Additional
10.8.3 [editorial] In other tables, in "Description", there is a text "Subtype of …" which is missing here
10.14.2 [editorial] Table cell ist not aligned on the right side
10.33.3 [editorial] In other tables, in "Description", there is a text "Subtype of …" here. Dito Table 182
10.33.3 [editorial] Any reason not to use UriString here?
10.35 [editorial] Any reason not to use UriString here?
10.36 [editorial] Any reason not to use UriString here?
13.2.1 [editorial] confiiguration -> configuration, and what is UrlString? I only know UriString
13.2.2 [editorial] DiscoveryURL -> DiscoveryUrl (also in the following figures), and Nodeid -> NodeId
13.2.5 [editorial] Nodeid -> NodeId, and muliple -> multiple

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Georg Biehler

2022-01-21 12:03

developer   ~0015790

fixed most of the comments besides the following (since most are straight forward edits, mostly without track changes)

1 [editorial] This page has no header
4.3.3 [editorial] is this abbreviation defined in another document? Part 82 has the abbreviation, but is not referenced from this document
6.2.2 [editorial] Organizes is a hierarchical reference, therefor has a different arrow symbol. Also the arrow from FxRoot to the AutomationComponent1 should be different.
13.2.1 [editorial] What is UrlString? I only know UriString

Georg Biehler

2022-01-24 14:52

developer   ~0015828

Last edited: 2022-01-25 11:56

further comments fixed beside the following

4.3.3 [editorial] is this abbreviation defined in another document? Part 82 has the abbreviation, but is not referenced from this document
13.2.1 [editorial] What is UrlString? I only know UriString

To 4.3.3:
Two possible ways to solve: Add Part82 to references and point to it from 4.3.3 (probably overkill), or delete “which can be derived from LLDP or other input”.

To 13.2.1:
Reworked figure to some extend and added some comments in our spec, we may need some more text there and update the section slightly.

Georg Biehler

2022-01-27 09:08

developer   ~0015878

fixed all comments (all without track changes, since editorial only)

Latest changes: Added reference to Part82 in section 4.3.3
Updated all figures in section 13.2

Georg Biehler

2022-01-27 09:09

developer   ~0015879

All editorial comments have been updated in the spec without track changes

Paul Hunkar

2022-02-11 14:02

manager   ~0015980

all of these were from the Siemens commented spec

Paul Hunkar

2022-02-11 14:03

manager   ~0015981

reviewed in separate actions, ok to close

Issue History

Date Modified Username Field Change
2022-01-21 10:52 Georg Biehler New Issue
2022-01-21 10:52 Georg Biehler Status new => assigned
2022-01-21 10:52 Georg Biehler Assigned To => Georg Biehler
2022-01-21 12:03 Georg Biehler Note Added: 0015790
2022-01-24 14:52 Georg Biehler Note Added: 0015828
2022-01-25 11:56 Georg Biehler Note Edited: 0015828
2022-01-27 09:08 Georg Biehler Note Added: 0015878
2022-01-27 09:09 Georg Biehler Status assigned => resolved
2022-01-27 09:09 Georg Biehler Resolution open => fixed
2022-01-27 09:09 Georg Biehler Fixed in Version => 1.00.00 Release
2022-01-27 09:09 Georg Biehler Note Added: 0015879
2022-02-11 14:02 Paul Hunkar Note Added: 0015980
2022-02-11 14:03 Paul Hunkar Status resolved => closed
2022-02-11 14:03 Paul Hunkar Note Added: 0015981
2022-05-30 23:04 Paul Hunkar Fixed in Version 1.00.00 Release => 1.00.00 RC3
2022-05-30 23:04 Paul Hunkar Target Version => 1.00.00 RC3